Oh man, this was so well done. What a strong start to a serial, Francesca! The protagonist's nervous, overactive internal dialogue had me smiling throughout. You are clearly strong when it comes to establishing character. I don't see enough romantic comedies on here, so I'm glad to have stumbled upon yours!
Well you might enjoy it all! It would put a spring in your step and a giggle in your throat and bring a warm fuzzy feeling to your tumm❤️ quite a few men have found it quite enlightening 😂😂
And so you should. Why else does one write? Your novel is next on my list of indie author friends, in fact it will make for a welcome break from this wet and freezing January, and bring a smile to my face too. Confession: I had already read your first chapter, and smile it had made me. Looking forward to reading the rest!
But why? This is a place to highlight your work. There is room for every genre, and serious writing comes in many forms. Don't be intimidated by the 'highbrows' literature doesn't live in boxes. 😉
Oh man, this was so well done. What a strong start to a serial, Francesca! The protagonist's nervous, overactive internal dialogue had me smiling throughout. You are clearly strong when it comes to establishing character. I don't see enough romantic comedies on here, so I'm glad to have stumbled upon yours!
I’m glad you enjoyed it! The book is available on Amazon 🙏😂❤️
Not my usual fare, I confess, but I really enjoyed this. You sure do have a flair for this genre. Well written. Congrats.
Thank you! Did you read the entire book?
No, just this post. As I said, romance stories aren't exactly my thing but good writing trumps genre every time IMHO.
Well you might enjoy it all! It would put a spring in your step and a giggle in your throat and bring a warm fuzzy feeling to your tumm❤️ quite a few men have found it quite enlightening 😂😂
Oh this is gooood! Came here via a mention on Notes, by the way. subscribing!
Thank you so much! Sorry for not responding earlier. I hadn’t seen your comment .
And so you should. Why else does one write? Your novel is next on my list of indie author friends, in fact it will make for a welcome break from this wet and freezing January, and bring a smile to my face too. Confession: I had already read your first chapter, and smile it had made me. Looking forward to reading the rest!
Thank you, Maria. I always feel so shy on here 😂😂 And I am so glad I made you smile ❤️
But why? This is a place to highlight your work. There is room for every genre, and serious writing comes in many forms. Don't be intimidated by the 'highbrows' literature doesn't live in boxes. 😉